The writer hunched down, by an ocean of hope
And let go of the anchoring rope,
seaworthy words, that his spilled soul splashed,
into a bottomless trope
A launching, without a champagne bottle smash,
A ripple bob in a still pond,
Poetical dinghies, seeking a home,
after dismal days in the beyond
Their joyful old shanties had salted,
Susurration of waves was their song,
The marooning of words in a slush pile,
As solitude stayed for too long
Critical storms were relentless,
A bite in an ocean of hooks,
And the writer waits, baited forever,
In the harbour for unpublished books
So much vibrant imagery here, and I like your use of “susurration”–it fits beautifully! Brilliant piece. Well done, Gavin! 🙂
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Thanks Mike really appreciate your comments and susurration was a great mood setter for this piece
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